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Clever idea why she "blushes". :P Surely a scared vampire - and it's not even a brush made of a wooden cross.
Well, she's also not really scared, so it works.
Oh, she so deserves this. And it is witty dialogue. Better than what I can come up with. You deserve a *Standing Ovation* You'll probably get another at the end.
Hmm, did you mean "plump cherry pie" in that second exchange? Not that I'm trying to nitpick, you understand, but you did *ask* people to point out errors they found... The dialog wouldn't work in balloons--referring here to the wordiness--but in this format, I think you can get away with it. Honestly, it's almost impossible to write "lovers play" dialogue without it sounding a little silly. But that's OK, they're meant to be having fun, after all... ^^
Wow Zero, I LOVELOVE LOVE the first panel. She looks so great and that plump bottom! YOWZA! x3 I think it looks wonderful. I think the dialogue is cute, and the inferrence about her blood in her bottom is a nice touch.
