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Mr. Stern disciplining Hakufu and Goei! Seems like one of them is enjoying it a bit more than the other. But knowing Mr. Stern I don't think that's going to last very long.
All the Story are the same and boring with no variety. The fact that Mr Stern is God makes the story a slog to get through. Think outside the box did dude. It's like you literally just copy/paste and swap character names out.
I love it! Hakufu is the perfect spankee! I love she hates spanking as a teen while a mature lady like Goei enjoys the forbidden pleasure of a spanking. 10/10 👍
Master Yunu- Why would I pitch? Your storytelling is the exact same one trick pony everytime. Mr Stern is Op and is somehow able to Spank every girl no matter if he in the right or not. It really shows your lack of creativity and laziness. I generated more entertaining spanking stories from GPT than I ever read from you , but I guess I am in the minority since criticism seems to be dead on the internet.
MoonlightKidd: I don't think it's so much that criticism is dead so much as it is legitimate criticism. Which I'm sorry to say I just don't think yours really falls under. The fact that you feel the need to brag about your own stories/content and approach what was a pretty civil response with an attitude of arrogance shows you're probably not the type of person people should be taking advice or criticism from. I would agree that you're probably in the minority since the story seems to be generally enjoyed, but it most certainly has nothing to do with your "criticism" lol.
Ok I'm gonna just say this about the matter you sugest Moonlightkidd, I don't want this to heat up more than it should, however here I must step in defense of the artist because of many reasons however my main point Master Yunu already did It for me but I will just further say this, it is not a matter of the lack of creativity, since I would have to say creativity is shown on something more than words, the positioning, expresivity and body language give you all the information in one simple image, the amount of time and brainstorm of poses and conceptual art he must have gone through is not like a Magic wand you wiggle and stuff happens there is time behind this work, and also, I guess that because of that same reasoning, you must really dislike Mina from the artist Circe, since she is always spanking characters from other universes, also Margaret is the same deal as Mr Stern should we now attack her?
So to cut a long story short, the problem you have here would be like complaining about Superman being OP on Earth, however if in Master Yunu's universes Mr. Stern is considered undeafatable, I see no problem with that.
Oh right also... Is a spanking drawing in an unknown place of the internet created for entertainment purposes only... How about we enjoy and simply move along.
PS: If you are so sure your stories are good how about you share one link to one of them? Unless... There are no such stories, which would make this just a whine over a trivial matter, and that is not the case, is it?
(Sorry about my English, I'm spanish and I'm not really that well versed in the grammar and vocabulary in English)
As someone who both draws and writes, I also think the criticism is unfair.
Are the scenarios similar? Sure, but hardly the first time I've seen it. Wordiness doesn't always equate to variety. I've read stories by authors who like specific things in their stories (nothing wrong with that. I do it myself. Authors and artists have their kinks and preferences), and, once you boil them down, they feel very samey-samey, even if there are other varying elements in them and are well-written. And it's not always necessary to get into long details all the time either. Some people want a long story, some want to get to the action. Same with drawings. Sometimes you want a full page or multi-page comic/story. Sometimes you just want the action shot and that's it. Nothing wrong with either.
Stern is OP? Yeah, he is. So what? He's not the first "can spank anyone" OCs to come about on this site. Margaret and Mina come to mind. Even Zylmyra, while sometimes being the recipient, has handled lots of people easily. Frankly, a lot of spanking scenarios require a suspension of disbelief that a spanker can handle the person over their lap easily, and a great amount of submissiveness on the part of the spankee, even among normal, non-superpowered adults. People have their OCs. Some keep to their own "universe". Others like to explore fan-fic style stuff with different characters from other works. And still others mix it with both. Again, nothing wrong with either.
These works are being presented for free (for the most part. Art put up as ads is another matter) for everyone to enjoy, so accept them graciously. If it's not your thing, then just move on, but no artist or writer here is beholden to anyone's preferences than their own.
This is exactly what I mean when I say Criticism is dead, I usually don't comment but because I choose to express my displeasure with his work, All of a sudden I should "shut up and move on". If he put it up on the net, It is open for criticism, Just because you sensitive bunch of babies don't like it do not mean I can't share my criticism. I will say it again, Mr Sterm is OP for no reason at all or none that I have seen, The RedWood academy thing make no sense at all unless he did a backstory on the government making that sort of thing legal, but from what I read, He doesn't explain at all how or why RedWood exist. Also the fact that Mr Stern can spank highly train Demons or Martial Artist and they don't just whoop his ass is stupid and lazzzzy writing. So again I find his story lazy, repetitive and boring, Don't like that I don't just kiss his ass ? Tough Shit, Accept it and move on.
MoonlightKidd: Well, I think you've thoroughly embarrassed yourself enough my friend. Here's a towel so you can wipe that egg off of your face. Maybe you can try commenting again in a year or two and get it right.
I'll say this and will finish my argument here, because I think I already said most of what I had to say, however I do want to ask you this, you do know that criticism is also bound and inherentely link to also be criticized right? Listen your opinion is as respectable as any other, however that does mean people have to agree, we are all bound conflict and have our diferences, but that's okay.
Now that being said there is no need to attack people because they are disagreeing with you, the only thing we are trying to convey is that a character being OP, (which I believe is stablished he is in his universe, since I saw no one face him), or a story being simplistic, (Which a simple image can tell you a full story with just tiny details, you just have to see them closely and understand them) does make that drawing, comic or even movie/video bad, take as example any movie of Michael Bay (Don't know if is correctly spelled) or the Movies of Fast and Furious and Pacific Rim, the story in those situations are a mere excuse to simply see cars drifting, explosions everywhere, and giantic robot hitting a shark monster with a cargo, with all honesty, isn't that cool?
But if we speak or narrative terms you won't get much out of it, is simply like comparing the phases 1,2,3 vs the 4th of Marvel, although not in the same way.
My point is that not everything must be a Shakespearian novel with intricate language, and character build ups, at times you just one one good guy punch a bad guy in the face, is it simple?
Yes.
But that's what you came here to see, if you didn't you wouldn't be watching.
Now I will understand if you reply however I think with this point everything should be now clear,
Have a nice day you MoonlightKidd and as for Master Yunu
Keep it going your pairings are always are joy to watch.
This is exactly what I mean when I say Criticism is dead, I usually don't comment but because I choose to express my displeasure with his work, All of a sudden I should "shut up and move on". If he put it up on the net, It is open for criticism, Just because you sensitive bunch of babies don't like it do not mean I can't share my criticism. I will say it again, Mr Sterm is OP for no reason at all or none that I have seen, The RedWood academy thing make no sense at all unless he did a backstory on the government making that sort of thing legal, but from what I read, He doesn't explain at all how or why RedWood exist. Also the fact that Mr Stern can spank highly train Demons or Martial Artist and they don't just whoop his ass is stupid and lazzzzy writing. So again I find his story lazy, repetitive and boring, Don't like that I don't just kiss his ass ? Tough Shit, Accept it and move on.
I'm not a huge fan of Mr stem either for reasons I'm not going into but I still keep my mouth shut and don't go on a 10 paragraph rant on why I hate it. Not everything is going to be suited to your tastes so just move on. Did the artist ask you for criticism? No? Then keep your mouth shut, unless they asked you, it's just you expressing your unwanted opinion to idk? Make them feel bad? Hurt them? Whatever was said was not criticism but just being an arrogant asshole. Criticism has to be asked for and delivered nicely for it to be counted as constructive criticism anything else is just insulting.
There's preferences, there's constructive criticism and then there is the destructive type of criticism that usually devolves into personal attacks.
That Master Yunu has had to go through this bad type of 'criticism' but has handled it with aplomb and also some compassion and grace just makes him more admireable in my opinion. I've expressed my opinion (this really falls under preferences) about a very few of his illustrations when I felt a given spanking was really unfair. But I never asked him to CHANGE anything because, as I said, this was just my opinion and you can't do criticism of people's preferences in art. But except for , maybe like 3 pieces of art out of many hundreds over the years, fact is I've enjoyed almost all his art because even though he never does my main pairing (F/m or F/M) he does my other two pairings very well indeed, often with humor and compassion or strictness when the story or situation requires it. His male tops have long been established as OP. This is , of course necessary to explain how they are able to spank some of the women and girls or aliens they do, and in the world of spanking art and fiction that is a legitimate choice so if you don't like it, then you should indeed stay away.
Basically, Moonlightkid, if you want your voice to be taken more seriously in the future:
1) Don't confuse attacking someone for their personal preferences in art with a criticism of their techniques in art. Let's take for instance the Trope of "Mary Sue". In general, for a writer, we can agree that an OP character, loved by everyone for no reason, who can't fail (or is morally perfect) is a BORING character, even if she/he isn't an author 'self insert' or some sort of paragon of a preferred political stance . However, there is art that employs Mary Sues (or their male counterparts) quite effectively: sometimes for humor, sometimes to critique the trope itself, and sometimes for a MOMENTARY effect on the story. In short you can have a Mary Sue character or moment and still have an enjoyable story. And lets not forget that some people just literally want a 'fanfic' or some other type of story where their preferred protagonist just is perfect and always wins. So even the classic Mary Sue character and story has SOME (a few) fans. You don't like OP OC's? Well, thats a personal preference, so stay away from those stories or this type of artwork.
2.Needless character attacks on a guy who was nothing if n ot polite to you don't make you look like anything other than a petulant child at best. We know MY did NOT pee in your cornflakes, whether you like his stuff or not he provides it free and at least sometimes its obvious he's put some effort into it, so what the heck did he ever do to you ?
3. Outside of technical considerations (artistic technique, realism of the drawing or illustration) which, while preference, can also kind of be objective (One can tell whether any lighting matches any shadows for instance, and another for instance, is the clothing always perfectly straight and crinkle free? In writing, there is grammar *the most objective critique* and characterization, though as pointed out sometimes poor or incomplete characterization is deliberate, or even a preference) most artistic critique is purely subjective , often regarding things like aesthetics. This is where your critique such as it is, falls. You need to ask yourself why you take different artistic choices so personally.
While I'm not normally a big fan of "Mr. Stern," simply because I much prefer feminine spankers, I do find this drawing quite amusing and appealing.
Teenage daughter wailing away while early-middle-aged mother is smiling contentedly, even though 'Mom' should be receiving somewhat harder swats of the carpet beater to her glowing crimson bare bottom, based on a wider, fuller swing for her spanks, that's a sweet outcome.
Obviously the girl has inherited the fully-rounded, opulently spankable bumcheeks which her mother is flaunting here... --C.K.
