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Page 15, where we discover that Kyuubi still has some more plans for her companion. Be careful of an aroused kitsune, I guess.
Story and Characters by Macha
Artwork by CM_Zero
Thank you all for your comments, but don't stop now! I want more honest opinions, want to hear what people like and what they want to see improved in my artwork.
Very nice conclusion page. I really enjoy the rubbing and the shaking in panel 1, the expressions in panels 2 and 3, the chibis in panel 4 and... what's left out of panel 5 !
This is a very well done page, Zero! I like the different panels, each telling a good part of the story. My favorites are probably the second and the fourth because in the second: Hisui is just too cute with her worried face, and you get to see Kyuubi's devious expression, signalling she's up to something. In the fourth, the chibi-ness is just adorable, with Hisui's flailing arms, and Kyuubi's cat-like pounce in-action. It sums up their relationship quite nicely! They are quite the pair.
If I had to criticize anything it would have to be that something about Hisui's cleavage seems a bit off, but it's really nothing to take away from the comic. Lovely page, definitely one of my favorites!!
I love the sight of Kyubi rubbing her bare red bottom, and Hisui's hand is sore too from all the spanking. And when Kyubi cutely pounces on the paniking Hisui and stripping her her with a rawr is just too cute. I love this comic and wish I could read the fiction sooooo badly! I love how it came out.
Oh and you wanted us to tell you how you can improve your artwork? I will give my honest opinion. It's not really what you need to gain, it's what you need to lose, and that happens to be the chibis. Chibis are well and good in all, but in all honest they're low on detail and a sad replacement for well drawn characters. I understand theres lots of people out there that love chibis and thats why you draw them. I'll admit they're cute but what more can be said about them. I'm not saying not to draw them, just to do it less, especially in your comics. Reading your comics used to be like watching anime, but with all the chibis I'm seeing in this comic and devotion it suddenly goes cartoon on me. You sacrificed your ability to draw an amazing piece of artwork even for one panel to please all the people that only read these so they can say "Awww, cute chibis". The beginning it's okay brcause it's a narrated introduction to give a premise to the story, but when your in the middle of scene or action it ruins the mood for it to suddenly go chibi. And an entire chibi picture or comic is okay because it's meant to be chibi all the way. If you want to improve you can't downgrade yourself. I'm really sorry if that was rude and displeased people, but I'm being honest. I love your art, and I want it to be the best you can make it. I hope you understand. ^_^
I think I agree with Xam; your pictures are a pleasure for the eyes, I already said that, but you may improve your work by drawing less chibis, especially in the middle of an action. I think the chibis aren't fit to show an emotion in a character's face.
However, this comic's conclusion is wonderful. Kyuubi got the spanking she wanted, and it looks like she still wants more.^^
hmph. why don't I get an aroused kitsune? her face in panel 4 is absolutely devilish...
i must disagree with the previous posters; i think the chibis are a great addition. they keep it very playful and light. since most of your series seem to be in that vein, i'd say keep the chibiness.
I think the use of chibis in this comics was reasonably limited and well done. It was a funny and cute way of summarizing things swiftly in the intro. After that, it was only used a few times and emphasized Kyuubi's personality nicely.
There can be such a thing as too much chibi or inappropriate chibiness, of course, but I don't find it here.
ROFLMAO! Love this From her rubbing her bottom, to those Great expressions in the middle level panels, to her roar as clothes go flying and those waving tails!
