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Marnie (or Mary) spanking Gloria (or Yuuri), both from Pokemon Sword&Shield. I've edited the names to match their localized names here. Also tried to emulate Marnie's speech style here, not sure how that worked out...

No particular reason for punishment given this time, and also due to some repetitive dialogue I've changed a little here and there for some variety.

Translated and edited by me, original by Pinkiri.

Original Link: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/85990097

Artist's Twitter: https://twitter.com/S_poke1006


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Chocochoco

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Date: Tue January 19, 2021
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Keywords: pokemon sword shield marnie mary yuuri gloria



Bardock1991
Member
Legs/Ankles Should Not Be Able To Bend Like That, But Ok... Great Translations BTW
#1 Tue January 19, 2021 18:11

SSJ
Member
I'm grateful for all the translations, but... damn, Pinkiri's dialogue is very generic and bad, as much as I like his artstyle.
"Bad kids get spankings."
"I'm too old to be spanked!"
"100 slaps!"
"Owiee! So embarrassing!"
"Reflect on your behaviour."
"My butt can't take it anymore!"
Rinse and repeat X million.
#2 Tue January 19, 2021 20:26

Jin
Senior Member
It is often the case that as writers, good Japanese artists are... good artists (they also tend to really, really love that "100 slaps" thing). Nonetheless I appreciate the effort, and the extra effort on the dialogue, Chocochoco.
#3 Tue January 19, 2021 21:03

Cante
Immortal Commenter
These two keep popping up together in these situations XD
#4 Tue January 19, 2021 22:38

Leonid
Fool Emeritus
Without context, backstory and going into the mind of the people involved, and with an allotment of words limited to what can comfortably fit into the margins of a drawing, it is quite hard to present a spanking in writing in appealing terms. I'd like to see you try, honestly.

And frankly, 90% of the spanking fiction I've read pretty much does the same. It's a mad rush to the panties down, bend over, followed by half a page of "slap thwack smack whap" lines followed by lines of "eeeeh, aieee, ahnnn" and variants. The actual mechanics of a spanking are, when it comes down to it, not really much more complicated.
#5 Wed January 20, 2021 09:38

sendynew
Member
I'm with SSJ.
Dialogues are mostly simple, generic and empty in meaning. There are no any disclosure of the situation, no backstory, no references to the relationship between these characters from original story. You can take it from one of these pictures, paste into many anothers and nothing will change.
It's better to watch this Artist pics (really great drawn, btw) without any balloons at all. But unfortunately, not all of his works have a versions with no text.
#6 Wed January 20, 2021 12:11

SSJ
Member
Yeah, sendynew, that's what I was talking about.

Also, Chocochoco, could you please take a stab at some of the Dawn/Cynthia pics of Pinkiri? They seem to be a favorite of his (or so I think; unless they're all commissions), so perhaps the dialogue is a bit more personal or meaningful.
#7 Wed January 20, 2021 13:58

Kellon
Member
The dialogue might be generic, but I still really like having it translated - the scolding and the begging adds a lot to the pictures for me.
#8 Wed January 20, 2021 16:52

Leonid
Fool Emeritus
Honestly, unless it's a comic where progression actually happens, all the dialog in spanking pics is generic to a point. It shows the same dynamics, situations and tropes we've seen a hundred times before. Sure, this might me more generic than usual, but I don't feel there's much improvement to be had.
#9 Thu January 21, 2021 09:28

Chocochoco
Member
@SSJ: I would, but most of his recent Dawn/Cynthia pictures have translucent speech balloons and I'm not good enough to edit over them; at my level, I can only edit over white text boxes/speech balloons.

There is some variation to the contexts of those pictures, but sometimes it's given in the picture description instead of the picture itself.
#10 Thu January 21, 2021 16:18


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