[BITTER RIVALS] - A Spanking Text Adventure

[victormammoth]

Everybody on the Upper East Side knows that you and Emily Laurel Rachelle-Briton don’t get along. In fact, you've been bitter rivals your whole lives.

But when your clueless Lit teacher assigns you to do a project together, you run the risk of your worst enemy finding out your humiliating secret: that at 18-years old, your mom still spanks you.

Now you're desperate to negotiate the terms of your grounding from your mother, hoping you can keep your secret hidden -- but your mom is not going to make this easy for you...

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I felt like sharing this story -- it's one of my most popular commissions! There are 3 chapters of it so far, and this is the first. In the next one, you play as the rival. It's a great text adventure with lots of spanking and humiliation. I'm actually working on an addition to it right now -- I think the third chapter of this game, where you get to give an ALL DAY PUNISHMENT -- a full day of spankings and humiliating treatment -- is one of my meanest and most fun pieces!!

If you'd like to commission your own spanking text adventure, send me an email at [email protected]. If you'd like to play more of the Bitter Rival series, check out my patreon -- the second chapter is called "RIVAL-SITTING," because you get to babysit your rival

Let me know what you think! Thanks as always for the support!

PATREON: https://www.patreon.com/wbvm
EMAIL: [email protected]

[SariaSong]

Great work, as always!

[remo1]

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Everybody on the Upper East Side knows that you and Emily Laurel Rachelle-Briton don’t get along. In fact, you've been bitter rivals your whole lives.

But when your clueless Lit teacher assigns you to do a project together, you run the risk of your worst enemy finding out your humiliating secret: that at 18-years old, your mom still spanks you.

Now you're desperate to negotiate the terms of your grounding from your mother, hoping you can keep your secret hidden -- but your mom is not going to make this easy for you...

It's hilarious and cute. The spankings are pretty extensive and I can only imagine the
poor young man's (or womans) humiliation.
But even though mom's heart seems to be in the 'right place' concerning the Family Feud, she seems like a sadistic bitch otherwise. Just looking for a chance to humiliate and spank --- not that I mind lol.
Anyway, here's what i got:


You ended the day with a red bottom.

You had your mouth washed.
You had to write lines.
You served corner time.
Your mom shared your punishment log.
Your rival saw your spanking.
You were sent to bed early.
You were spanked by your rival.
10/10
PERFECT SCORE!

[Super Kami Guru]

I noticed a few errors here or there, but the game was pretty well designed. I always have an appreciation for these text based adventures. Particularly since I prefer reading about spankings.

My only real issues was with the story and it's plot holes.
I only played one round, so maybe I need to go through again and try other stuff, but is there an ending where you don't get spanked?
The ending I got said I got a 10/10 perfect score, but it really felt like a loss to me.

[That_Guy_With_The_Fandoms]

It was a very entertaining game! Though, a part of me started to feel bad for the character! I mean he didnt get aftercare and was teased relentlessly without a break. Maybe next time the mom wont be as malicious lol

[remo1]

Originally Posted by That_Guy_With_The_Fandoms

It was a very entertaining game! Though, a part of me started to feel bad for the character! I mean he didnt get aftercare and was teased relentlessly without a break. Maybe next time the mom wont be as malicious lol

And there's the other thing: what's dad think of this? I mean this would seem to be hUGELY embarrassing to the family, and honestly as far as maintaining the Family Honor the son has done a standup job and doesn't deserve such humiliation. Mom could have continued her 'child REARing' practices in private and not given the one enemy family they have salacious material.
That being said, I suspect she has a plan to bring the families back into harmony. And I get the idea that she wants Emily as her daughter in law. They got on so famously, after all, two peas in a pod. Problem is while I've detected some possible 'like' or 'sympathy' from Emily, she mostly EAGERLY conspired to painfully humiliate a young man
who had really done nothing to her. I just don't see how this is good for him or how he gets over this. Excessive as the spankings might seem, it's the humiliation and cruelty that I think really hurt here. And I don't understand how his mom could betray him like that, even if its a sacrifice to end or help end the family feud. That's her kid, and right now he's probably devastated inside.

It's a hot game and I will eventually play the rest of it. But for all my kinks about punishment and humiliation, I feel sorry for the main character.

* I haven't played a daughter play through , but I don't think it makes a difference. The poor kid you play is probably a psychological wreck right now.

[Ashilivione]

Originally Posted by remo1

And there's the other thing: what's dad think of this? I mean this would seem to be hUGELY embarrassing to the family, and honestly as far as maintaining the Family Honor the son has done a standup job and doesn't deserve such humiliation. Mom could have continued her 'child REARing' practices in private and not given the one enemy family they have salacious material.
That being said, I suspect she has a plan to bring the families back into harmony. And I get the idea that she wants Emily as her daughter in law. They got on so famously, after all, two peas in a pod. Problem is while I've detected some possible 'like' or 'sympathy' from Emily, she mostly EAGERLY conspired to painfully humiliate a young man
who had really done nothing to her. I just don't see how this is good for him or how he gets over this. Excessive as the spankings might seem, it's the humiliation and cruelty that I think really hurt here. And I don't understand how his mom could betray him like that, even if its a sacrifice to end or help end the family feud. That's her kid, and right now he's probably devastated inside.

It's a hot game and I will eventually play the rest of it. But for all my kinks about punishment and humiliation, I feel sorry for the main character.

* I haven't played a daughter play through , but I don't think it makes a difference. The poor kid you play is probably a psychological wreck right now.

You're operating under the assumption that the mother means well, and has everyone's best interests at heart. She doesn't. She's a monster who enjoys her son/daughter's humiliation.

The father isn't aware of the entire situation. He knows the mom is strict and spanks the son/daughter, but not to this extent. He's a high powered individual who's largely absent and constantly working.

Yes, the rival is sadistic and gleeful here, but... Well, I won't give any spoilers away. I suggest you check out Victor's Patreon, and read the second chapter. All I'll say is you get the option to be mean or nice, which will change the ending considerably.

[NanoHatake]

Dude I frickin love this one. I wasn't too into the camp one as much as I was into this one. I've been playing it trying to get 10/10. Love this one dude please make more

[That_Guy_With_The_Fandoms]

Originally Posted by remo1

And there's the other thing: what's dad think of this? I mean this would seem to be hUGELY embarrassing to the family, and honestly as far as maintaining the Family Honor the son has done a standup job and doesn't deserve such humiliation. Mom could have continued her 'child REARing' practices in private and not given the one enemy family they have salacious material.
That being said, I suspect she has a plan to bring the families back into harmony. And I get the idea that she wants Emily as her daughter in law. They got on so famously, after all, two peas in a pod. Problem is while I've detected some possible 'like' or 'sympathy' from Emily, she mostly EAGERLY conspired to painfully humiliate a young man
who had really done nothing to her. I just don't see how this is good for him or how he gets over this. Excessive as the spankings might seem, it's the humiliation and cruelty that I think really hurt here. And I don't understand how his mom could betray him like that, even if its a sacrifice to end or help end the family feud. That's her kid, and right now he's probably devastated inside.

It's a hot game and I will eventually play the rest of it. But for all my kinks about punishment and humiliation, I feel sorry for the main character.

* I haven't played a daughter play through , but I don't think it makes a difference. The poor kid you play is probably a psychological wreck right now.

Seriously! I love mother/son spankings, which seems to be rare on this site. The early bedtimes, forcing him to still call his mother "mommy" they all added for a great time. Its just that I felt like the mother was needlessly cruel to her son in regards to the punishments. Like half of the fun with a spanking is the aftercare. Once someone has gotten their bare bottom beat as badly as the MC. You'd expect the spanker to show some comfort, especially if its his mother. Mommy doms should be able to give comfort just as much as they are able to dish out embarrassing punishments.

Also, I see what you mean when you say that the two families could be brought together. I was hoping that Emily would say or do something that would upset MC's mom so much that she'd get her buns toasted. Get a taste of MC's medicine that might make her sympathise with him more and they can bury the hatchet while both sporting red rears.

Im sorry Victor, I dont mean to take the game's story super seriously since at the end of the day this is just a kinky spanko story. I will look forward to the next game you up out! You are great at this stuff man, keep it up!

[spiderx]

That game was better than I thought!