Justicar

[postajerry]

bellissimo gioco tra tutti quelli a cui ho giocato, questo mi piace davvero unico piccolo difetto non so andare avanti praticamente per fare punti devo continuare a lavorare con i calci di punizione e lavorare in magazzino

[catser]

A very good game for such an early version, the game has an interesting idea. I will be watching the further development of this game. I just don't quite understand how to complete the 3 task with the boxes, it doesn't occur to me how to arrange them correctly, and I don't quite understand how to catch a golden carp) Because my level of English leaves much to be desired.

[gogo_gregory]

Great game. Most quality of life changes I'd like to see have already been suggested, so I look forward to seeing the development.

[Shirabaru]

bellissimo gioco tra tutti quelli a cui ho giocato, questo mi piace davvero unico piccolo difetto non so andare avanti praticamente per fare punti devo continuare a lavorare con i calci di punizione e lavorare in magazzino

Thank you! There is some grinding involved, yes. This will became better with more subquest with reputation as a reward.

I don't quite understand how to catch a golden carp

Sorry, it's not implemented yet. Glad you liked the game

Great game. Most quality of life changes I'd like to see have already been suggested, so I look forward to seeing the development.

Thank you!

[dragoonleon]

Originally Posted by Shirabaru

Thank you for detailed review!
Some quality of life updates are planned for the next version. There will be less walking and less extra confirmations. Hope game will feel more smooth after that.

But with some things I not sure that agree. Auto spanking is not going to be a thing. There is Olivia who was introduced exactly for that option. If you want to watch - just let her handle it. If you want to do it yourself - control the process.

Boxes are intended to be hard. And reward is good when you finish the quest. And more to come when bratty game for Tora will be there. The intended way is to try and deal with consequences. If you want to savescum it's your right, but I'm not going to make it easier to cheat

But anyway I really appreciate your comment. Sorry if something you suggested will remain not addressed, I need to keep the game intended way. But I'll try to make it as fun as possible

Appreciate that less confirmations are intended. I didn't mind doing the spankings myself but hired Olivia the moment I could since the process becomes tedious fast. I appreciate it as a game mechanic but having to click spank every 5 swats on something that's already set in stone is dull. That's just my two cents though, not really a huge issue.

The box puzzle on the other hand, I wouldn't consider having a reset puzzle button cheating. You're only being paid 10 and 2 rep along with a reward that provides no tangible benefits on the 3rd success. You're being paid peanuts for something that requires no mistakes. That's why I suggested either removing that restriction or upping the pay. Also there's at least one puzzle where you can complete it in a way that softlocks you, so...

End of the day, I don't expect anything. It's your game and you'll make it the way you want. Thanks for replying anyways and hope things go well going forward

[The Dashinator]

Hey there, was kinda "researching" the game you created, well, more like really a research. I kinda thought about creating a game of my own, so I looked through the files and noticed some stuff that didn't see in any games before. So, I thinks it's way easier to ask than find out myself (cuz I already tried to find out) So... What are those "*.png_" files? I kinda never seen anything like it before, how you create those? Or is there a way to edit those afterwards? Just really curious how all the stuff works, guess it has it's purpose and maybe even could optimize the process, atleast I hope so, because I don't have much time on creating, kinda hope not to abandon it too soon. Anyway - thanks for your time.

[Shirabaru]

but having to click spank every 5 swats on something that's already set in stone is dull

I understand your point but this option is here for those who likes to remove spankee clothes gradually at any point they want, not just at the start. I prefer it this way but if I get a lot of negative feedbacks I'll think about some resolution.

one puzzle where you can complete it in a way that softlocks you, so...

This is also intentional. There is 'Z' button to give up just for this case. Maybe I'll up the reward, not sure yet. I need to adjust economy anyway. This puzzle has only 3 rooms for now, it would be boring to did them a lot anyways but for early game econory bigger rewards will be too much. Next rooms if I deceide to extend it will give you better rewards... or there will be no more rooms and you just unlock other quests with Tora with more fun stuff.

What are those "*.png_" files

It's ususal png files but encrypted by game engine to not allow player just watch images in folder and actually play game to unlock them

There is no hints to develop game faster besides experience. In terms of arts - I have a software 'spanking image generator' which is now in development state. You can use it to get arts for the game pretty fast when it's ready. If you agree to terms of use.

[SnarkFu]

Found a bug when sleeping at your sisters house.
On Saturday go to your sisters house and sleep until next morning.
On Sunday if you sleep for any amount of time the screen will go black and won't come back up, you can move around and interact but you can't see anything, the only way out of this is to navigate back to your room in the city and sleep which is pretty difficult to do blind.

[42idiot]

Played a little of your game, it was interesting.

Especially since I played the opposite of what you intended... getting spanked as much as I could.

I love that with Tora I managed to get a +1 Respect after getting spanked, so I got to hire the spanker (I messed up every day to get punished after work so I got zero respect from work lol).

Besides the obvious the people already told you, here some quick ideas:

1- More consequences for failure. This could go to interesting scenes, since the vice (the girl who help/punishes us) will sure ask why we keep failing. This could lead to some serious talk besides the punishment, even advancing a bit of romance or unlocking new mechanics (like reward spankings if we got right and nothing if we failed) or just tallks about homesickness, responsibility, stress etc.. It will sure add some variety for the scenes that counts (the relationships with characters) and advance a bit of story of the characters.

1.5- What's the "discipline" stat for? maybe it's used for the employees? I didn't check since I played "the wrong way" lol

2- More scenes with Olivia (I believe it's the name of hired spanker, right?), since she teases us in the beginning of her first day. It's probably a thing for the romance but I would love to get spanked before/after the day. Maybe the MC could ask to "test her skills".... or maybe the vice (the one who punishes us for failures) could ask her for a double spanking if we fail? Or we need "a talk" after sending her the wrong orders? Or we get the pressure of our position and we ask her for suggestions?

3- I'm sure more scenes with the vice are planned since we see her in her room during the evening.... be aware that the character is both at work and in her room "at the same time", let her go away after we exit the room/building. She needs some rest, poor girl!

4- Are you going to open some houses, maybe the one of the character we hire (since the bodyguard lives in the building and the vice sleeps at the inn)?

5- Loved the goblin girl!

6- Can't wait for the captain/pirate

7- The other people around the city are just like ghosts, give them some life. A quick word, some personality... and then maybe we could catch some of the girls we sent to punishments! This could lead to some fun talks!

8- More way to spend money! I believe it's already planned since we got one building we could enter in the living quarters with nothing to do....

9- a side quest, where new laws arrives so that minor crimes are punished with max sentence and viceversa! Maybe even spanking becomes a crime, which is punished.. with spankings, which could lead all our characters in a loop of trouble, since the justiciar is not above the law itself.
You have some kind of government palace already I believe, maybe a crazy witch or something is making fun... of the law itself? And who is better than the justiciar to fix it (or make it worse!)

So yeah, can't wait for the next update and for new spankee interactions!

[Shirabaru]

Played a little of your game, it was interesting.

Thank you.. oh, that is a lot. I'll try to answer all of this quickly.

First of all there are some engine limitations. As much as I want to make game like real life experience, some of this suggestions are to hard to implement. Give a personality to 32000 random characters? No way. The girls who walk the city are filling the empty world. They will stay that way.

The same argument is, sadly, for 'playing game wrong'. This is dom-sided game. You will have to do good to finish the story, get the scenes, and mostly if you win in any case - you will spank not be spanked. This is just my personal preference and code opf Justicar is already complicated enough to introduce another way of playing. But there are parts of the game where you can act as a sub - it's planned romance quests in form of 'Bratty game'. There you can deserve spanking and winning at the same time.

There will be no sidequests which messes with court process. It's already complicated enough.

Most of interraction with characters you suggested will be in the game. Not exactly in that form, but will. You will need money. Houses will be opened. Goblins will be loved

Discipline is 'how likely employees will mess up.'