[Kaeli's Apprentice] - RPG MV game in progress

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by meruem2

This looks really good so far. I love the setting and characters plus the different genders are a really nice way to make it enjoyable for everyone.
It's surprisingly bug free for the early stages of game too, only thing I found were some walls with paintings you could walk into.
I have two small annoyances but both are really more on me than the game. 1 I seem to accidently choose dialogue options more than in other games and can't figure out if and how they're different. 2 The reactions of the main character to punishment spankings and to willing spankings are very similar. I find it a bit weird that we tell the guy in the library we want to be spanked hard and then act as if were hating it. It's different for willing punishments of course but the interactions with him don't seem like that. In that regard I liked the interactions with the two doms im the inn in the first game, even when asking for punishment there was allways a line or two saying the main character was enjoying herself.
But these are just things that annoy me personally and there very minor, it's still an amazing project and I'm looking forward to more.

Thank you for your feedback! Both of your complaints are valid. The thing with accidentally choosing options might be that I keep forgetting to disallow the escape option for dialogues - then when you press escape, the game chooses for you, usually the first option. I hate that too. I just need to remember to disallow it every time.
The reactions - maybe this is partially because I actually like to get spanked to the point where I hate it. But I will see if I can include a nice fun/erotic spanking too, or adjust the reactions with Patrigue and other fun spankings.

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Originally Posted by vividcolour

Awesome game! I love how you can get your friend into all sorts of trouble.

Thank you!

Huh..? My friend gets me in trouble all the time...
Very nice game, tried to play it F/m only, also made my friend female.
Unfortunately, there are still some masters...
But compliments to all the work into this game, text and humor are nice!
Well done and will certainly continue playing!

Thank you In the future I might let players flip the genders of the male masters for now I hope you can at least avoid the spankings that you don't want to get...

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Originally Posted by deadp

The demo is very well done. Will there others like the guy in the library that we can ask to be spank? At the end of the demo are going have more party members?

Thank you! yes, there will be others for sure and right at the point where the demo ended, the genie from the lamp joins as another party member. Umma and Leigh don't necessarily get along so you can only have one of them with you at a time, but you can switch between them fairly easily. Since they are very different personalities they offer different paths and ways to solve quests. Umma will also spank you if you as much as breathe wrong, so I think that's gonna be fun )

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Originally Posted by bonemouth

What a wonderful concept! I couldn't stop playing until I had done everything and gotten to the end of content. Can't wait for more!

This makes me so happy! Thank you. I am also planning to write a brief walkthrough - soon (I hope) you'll be able to check if you discovered all the content of the demo

[deadp]

I'm the same way, I to get spank till it hurts like hell, glad you have the mc gender swap cause I'm a big fan of f/m spanking.
Theres one bug I found is that when your in mistress room before talking Leigh. You can click on the book and the dialogue comes up like she us there.

[Gojira01]

Came here to make the same comment as deadp. If you snoop around your Mistresses room after she leaves on her trip, and look at the book, your friend has a conversation with you even though you have not gone to her room yet.

[32167]

this is a really amazing game! I like it very much!

Bug find: If you spank Leigh at the basement and choose "You didn't save me from Mayla" - after spanking scene you get a black screen forever.

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by deadp

I'm the same way, I to get spank till it hurts like hell, glad you have the mc gender swap cause I'm a big fan of f/m spanking.
Theres one bug I found is that when your in mistress room before talking Leigh. You can click on the book and the dialogue comes up like she us there.

Thanks! The bug should be fixed now.

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Originally Posted by Gojira01

Came here to make the same comment as deadp. If you snoop around your Mistresses room after she leaves on her trip, and look at the book, your friend has a conversation with you even though you have not gone to her room yet.

Fixed Thanks

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Originally Posted by 32167

this is a really amazing game! I like it very much!

Bug find: If you spank Leigh at the basement and choose "You didn't save me from Mayla" - after spanking scene you get a black screen forever.

Thank you! The bug should be fixed now. The screen should fade back in after you spank Leigh.

[Malatar]

Wow Artsy, this is excellent work for such an early build. Thank you so much for sharing it! I love the amount of detail that's in it already... Super impressive.

[Aprion]

that was fun. looking forward to more

[Mondy]

how beautiful. can't wait to try it. thank you so much

[hello001]

The game is incredibly well done! I can't wait for more. Bug wise I only saw a couple parts where I walked on objects I shouldn't have been able too, like the book in the last room. I also like all the little hints at possible ways to get in trouble in the future when everything is more fleshed out. There are so many opportunities that I didn't expect, and missed on the first play through. It feels like most of the rooms have a way for a spanking to happen to you or your companion.

[nickypeters]

I love this so much! Thanks for making it so adaptable!!