[Scarlet Hills School for Girls - Rain ver.]

[f3231aszxzcw]

Note: The polling is no longer considered valid to me as I have add some other characters.
@ROBM : If possible, please delete the polling

Scarlet Hills School for Girls - Rain ver. v0.1

Hi, I am thrill to share my first ever made game by my own.

Current build: https://mega.nz/#!RHwhTCjI!PSO2gdURF...nZ-NJwYSgNeCXs
Password: animeotk

The game is at its very early stage, so not much content is
available for now. The game title is inspired by the game SMACS
made by Zekel who allows me to use its school name for the title.

As I have added every detailed information in the game itself,
I don't want to spoil the content here.

Please do give a try, it's short but with branches
and options.

For now, the game focuses on the perspective of a schoolgirl called Rain,
but in the future I may make other characters playable into multiple version,
like playing the Principal or School counselor.

I would be glad to hear your feedback on my game,
like who's your favorite character?

I may even plan to create my own sprite and art if this game goes
popular...

Thank you!

[rysaku]

Pretty good start, some of the dialogue goes on for a bit too long but overall a strong start!

[f3231aszxzcw]

Originally Posted by rysaku

Pretty good start, some of the dialogue goes on for a bit too long but overall a strong start!

Yes, I highly understand this is a spanking game, so maybe I
should shorten other unrelated dialogue a bit.

[johny741]

To be honest, I didn't go in expecting much, but this has incredible potential. If you stay on this, keep your passion, and don't stop improving, you might end up one of the better ones. Just remember that potential is inert until enacted upon.

[f3231aszxzcw]

Originally Posted by johny741

To be honest, I didn't go in expecting much, but this has incredible potential. If you stay on this, keep your passion, and don't stop improving, you might end up one of the better ones. Just remember that potential is inert until enacted upon.

Yes, I spent a lot of time creating paths and endings.
The bad thing is player has less control where player has
to save the game and check out the status and codex menu for more info
before uncontrollable events to see the branches.

That said, currently the sandbox system is not available.

[29fastly]

This is a really strong start, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops!

[f3231aszxzcw]

Uhm, having seen the poll result after one day,
I would like to analyse the result a bit:

1. I don't see why the school nurse is popular because
there aren't any stories about her yet.

2. Cindy is popular probably because many players have chosen
the option "Against the policy", in which case I guess the ending
for Rain might end up harshly with being punished by her Grandma.

Hint: There's a hidden path but you must ensure Rain's charm is
enough when Rain went out the home in the morning.

I have polished the dialogue and Grammar a bit, but will save them for
the next version.

I will also work on balancing the stats gain and loss as well as the
clothing system to let player choose what Rain wears in the future.

[milf]

The poll is your own fault. If an option was not meant to be chosen it should have been left off. Why even add an option when it confuses even the creator? Even as an control option it makes no sense and skews practical results.

[f3231aszxzcw]

Originally Posted by milf

The poll is your own fault. If an option was not meant to be chosen it should have been left off. Why even add an option when it confuses even the creator? Even as an control option it makes no sense and skews practical results.

Actually, I can understand the cause by guessing
but I was trying to lure some answers out.

It doesn't have to have a full story yet.
The original purpose is to see if the character is liked or created successfully (Same for me actually).

Let me just take a guess that they vote her because of the "anticipation".

Also, the poll is for long term use, however, as I may keep adding new characters, I don't know how to create a new poll,
so I just put all of them now.

[Taiga]

I really liked this so far. The paths and the status point system has a lot of potential. Loved all the little easter eggs as well. Can't wait for more!