[A Servant's Tale] - a complete RPG MV game

[Verz]

I second Senda's sentiment.

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by Senda

alright just beat the game. Really enjoyed it good job! though would like to get a few dom choices in at some point

There is one dom choice, you can spank

 

the Aisibum if you choose Wotsrite as your god and make sure to get grounding dust from the healer before you confront the Aisibum.

I am glad you liked it otherwise! I found it hard to include dom choices as the main character doesn't seem to be wired that way. But I think it might change in the next episode, as she gains confidence as a mage

[SrPlushe]

Hum, I unlocked all scenes in Whapton (haha, Whapton) and the Mansion, acording the instructions.
But I can't move forward after that.

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by Paddlinton

Hum, I unlocked all scenes in Whapton (haha, Whapton) and the Mansion, acording the instructions.
But I can't move forward after that.

 

Read the book you got from Lawrence. It will unlock a new area to the south - the igloo.

[Gojira01]

One minor nit-pick about Lawrence. When you choose him to punish you for snooping, his lecture refers to your mentor as "he" even though I chose a female. It only occurs once in his dialog, the next part has the correct gender usage.

[unfvckable]

A bug report, after the misson in town, at the temple i touched the statue at its right side, then my character stucked when the god of regret asked her to follow him

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by Gojira01

One minor nit-pick about Lawrence. When you choose him to punish you for snooping, his lecture refers to your mentor as "he" even though I chose a female. It only occurs once in his dialog, the next part has the correct gender usage.

Thanks! I'll fix it tomorrow.

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Originally Posted by unfvckable

A bug report, after the misson in town, at the temple i touched the statue at its right side, then my character stucked when the god of regret asked her to follow him

Thanks for the bug report, will get fixed tomorrow

[42idiot]

Ehi, I just wanted to tell you I liked your game, a lot.

I liked the balance between the story and the open-world aspect of it, since I like to explore and seeing scenes more rather than just following a story (which was good BTW).

I liked how some scenes were repeatable, like the one with the vampire. The gods and the dom couple are great too, too bad you can only call the deities for the "magic favor", I wanted to play with Bidissima more ahah

The first time I played the game I got confused and thought that you could select the MC gender instead of Kaeli and also I found a bug where I couldn't continue the Bidissima quest (the woman dialogue was only for the shop).
Tried the game a second time and everything worked correctly, liked the Bidissima quest a lot.

Also, I found some faces "too old" for my tastes, but that's only my opinion.

Can't wait to get in trouble with the charm magic, I hope to see more repeatable interactions with different spanking.
Like trying to charm the same person, fail every time and get a different spanking every time, maybe to the point to getting one just for talking because the person is sure your using some sort of trick.

About the repeatability, the vampire one is done well and it's funny, I'd loved the possibility to play with Bidissima cane more, or getting on the nerves of the innkeeper and wife more, or pray to the gods more, or getting banned from the Lawrence mansion and getting a spanking everytime I get in there (with changing dialogues like you did with the vampire).


Also, if you're feeling ambitious, I could suggest sub-quests to get the favor of the gods:
- you can swear your faith to one or more of the three gods to acces to a series of sub-quest for getting some bonus with your charm magic


- with Bidissima (my favourite), you can use your magic to get pleasure for you or your target, both when getting spanked, spank or if you assist to a spanking. This could lead to longer/harder/plesurable spanking and amusing scenes where a punishment change in other things ahaha
- with Wotsrite (Iit's the god of justice, right?) you can use your magic the get the message clear faster in the mind of the spankee/spanker or your mind so punishiment spankings are more effective and the severity and lenght of the spanking are reduced
- with the god of regret you get access to more scenes: you can make people regret their choices so thieves start to confess or you can return to some people and asking for more spanking for your precedent misbehavior

In short:
- Bidissima for mostly sub route
- Wotsrite for mostly dom route
- God of regret for neutral/switch (since it "just" add more scenes)

And yes, add the possibility to follow more than one god but you can't use at the same time Worsrite charm and Bidissima charm since those are opposite.

Well, it was a good start so keep coding!

[ArtsyWeasel]

Originally Posted by 42idiot

Ehi, I just wanted to tell you I liked your game, a lot.

I liked the balance between the story and the open-world aspect of it, since I like to explore and seeing scenes more rather than just following a story (which was good BTW).

I liked how some scenes were repeatable, like the one with the vampire. The gods and the dom couple are great too, too bad you can only call the deities for the "magic favor", I wanted to play with Bidissima more ahah

The first time I played the game I got confused and thought that you could select the MC gender instead of Kaeli and also I found a bug where I couldn't continue the Bidissima quest (the woman dialogue was only for the shop).
Tried the game a second time and everything worked correctly, liked the Bidissima quest a lot.

Also, I found some faces "too old" for my tastes, but that's only my opinion.

Can't wait to get in trouble with the charm magic, I hope to see more repeatable interactions with different spanking.
Like trying to charm the same person, fail every time and get a different spanking every time, maybe to the point to getting one just for talking because the person is sure your using some sort of trick.

About the repeatability, the vampire one is done well and it's funny, I'd loved the possibility to play with Bidissima cane more, or getting on the nerves of the innkeeper and wife more, or pray to the gods more, or getting banned from the Lawrence mansion and getting a spanking everytime I get in there (with changing dialogues like you did with the vampire).


Also, if you're feeling ambitious, I could suggest sub-quests to get the favor of the gods:
- you can swear your faith to one or more of the three gods to acces to a series of sub-quest for getting some bonus with your charm magic


- with Bidissima (my favourite), you can use your magic to get pleasure for you or your target, both when getting spanked, spank or if you assist to a spanking. This could lead to longer/harder/plesurable spanking and amusing scenes where a punishment change in other things ahaha
- with Wotsrite (Iit's the god of justice, right?) you can use your magic the get the message clear faster in the mind of the spankee/spanker or your mind so punishiment spankings are more effective and the severity and lenght of the spanking are reduced
- with the god of regret you get access to more scenes: you can make people regret their choices so thieves start to confess or you can return to some people and asking for more spanking for your precedent misbehavior

In short:
- Bidissima for mostly sub route
- Wotsrite for mostly dom route
- God of regret for neutral/switch (since it "just" add more scenes)

And yes, add the possibility to follow more than one god but you can't use at the same time Worsrite charm and Bidissima charm since those are opposite.

Well, it was a good start so keep coding!

Oh wow, thank you so much, those are some fantastic suggestions! I agree with you on most things, and I'll definitely consider adding things to the game... I am currently working on the next episode, which should work as a standalone game, with the main character being Kaeli's apprentice and exploring the charm magic. This one should be much bigger and more ambitious (working on some custom assets... Like the tree spirit, that was painted by me) and I would really like it to include the gods again, especially Bidissima. So right now I'm focused on that and I'm not sure if I'll habe the mental capacity to expand on this first episode (basically a prologue?). But if I do, I'll definitely include some of the stuff you suggested!

[Dloohi]

Congratulations, it was a really nice game, and the fact it is your first ever made makes it even more impressing. I have just finished my first playthroguh, and I certainly missed some scenes, because I focused more on roleplay and making choices my character would make. I will try out other routes for sure. I liked the setting a lot - the master / servant pairing worked really well for me, because the spankings felt realistic and understandable given the situation. I would love to see more of the dynamics between the Kaeli and his/her apprentice in your following games. I can't wait to see how will you explore the magic aspect, as it can led to some really interesting scenarios. It kind of reminded me of the SpankFantasy-2 game, where we were learning how to use our new powers. Speaking of which, what I missed in your game was broader set of unique characters. Charmings as they are, all characters beside the main duo feel a bit like a background. I think it would be nice, if some of them were more flashed out and given more background / dialogue.



I managed to complete the game without any troubling bugs, but I have to say, that I was close to giving up, when I couldn't find a way to do the dishes.


Keep up with your good work and have fun doing the sequel!