[ A Tale of Twin Pendants ] Game

[victormammoth]

So, after playing and admiring all of the excellent RPGMaker games people have made on this site, I finally decided to start making my own. It's really fun to make, and honestly relaxing. Here is the beginning of a project with much more to come:

A TALE OF TWIN PENDANTS:

You are an orphan with no memory, washed up on a distant shore, made to start again. Kiva, your rescuer becomes your caretaker, and you become idle -- now Kiva tells you to fetch an oak paddle for your next spanking. But can a mysterious pair of pendants change your fate?

Version 1.0 - http://www.mediafire.com/file/vgbg38...dants.zip/file
Version 1.1 - http://www.mediafire.com/file/78wwou...s_1.1.zip/file
(More endings and different character designs!)

Let me know what you think! Please leave your ideas in the comments -- I love hearing from you all.

[I eat cake]

link doesn't seem to work.

[victormammoth]

Originally Posted by I eat cake

link doesn't seem to work.

Fixed! My bad, try it now, please

[Gojira01]

2 bugs to report.

1 - After drinking with your friend and passing out, the little girl is there to repeat her scene of giving you the pendant.
2 - When you go to leave after watching your friends spanking, the screen just goes black.

[SariaSong]

There's not a lot of content here, but it's a good start. You've got a great writing style, definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

[Super Kami Guru]

What is here is pretty good. You've made solid start, and I hope to see more content for it in the future. What plans are there, if I may ask and will we be able to spank anyone?

[Dongo]

there doesn't seem to be a location of the other pendant

[victormammoth]

Originally Posted by Gojira01

2 bugs to report.

1 - After drinking with your friend and passing out, the little girl is there to repeat her scene of giving you the pendant.
2 - When you go to leave after watching your friends spanking, the screen just goes black.

Thank you! It will be fixed in the next update.

---------- Post added at 02:33 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:30 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Super Kami Guru

What is here is pretty good. You've made solid start, and I hope to see more content for it in the future. What plans are there, if I may ask and will we be able to spank anyone?

Thank you! Short answer, yes.

 

The first person you'll be able to spank is Kiva -- you'll need the white pendant and to find the inappropriate novel she's reading in her bookshelf.

Eventually, you'll be able to spank everyone in the game if your authority stat is high enough. But you do start on the bottom, pun intended.

---------- Post added at 02:35 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:33 AM ----------

Originally Posted by SariaSong

There's not a lot of content here, but it's a good start. You've got a great writing style, definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

Thanks! I'm just going to release the game in little bits -- I really love messing around with RPGMaker, so this is just fun for me. I'm writing my usual text adventures, too, but this is a cool side project.

---------- Post added at 02:37 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:35 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Dongo

there doesn't seem to be a location of the other pendant

This could be a bug you've found, but first try these:

 

When you talk to the girl, tell her she should go back to her parents.

 

Tell the girl you love secrets.

As of right now, the plan will be that you can ONLY choose one...later on, that may change. But for now, to see both, you'd have to try two different play throughs.

[EhSteve]

Just wanted to pop in and say thanks for this. I like where this is going!

[42idiot]

Ehi, just tried the game, it's an interesting start!

I got the same bugs Gojira metioned, the girl instead of returning home when we choose that we love secrets bumps into a tree and stay there, eventually giving us another red pendant.
Also when we try to go upstairs in Sara's house, before drinking, she addresses us as P[1].

I loved the "amulet of Naughtyness" item in SQDX, so this game is promising... there are plans to wear that amulet, right? RIGHT? (right now it's not wearable, and the equip menu show you with a sword and other things)
That bench just outside the inn looks so promising, can't wait for updates.

I heard that you're going to add stats to this game, I'm ok with a dom/sub stat like you did in Puttsdale but I advise you to keep thing simple, without adding all the other stat like you did in the other game.
Also, how those stat will work with the amulet?

And going off topic, I love "Welcome to Puttsdale", hope to see a new update in the future.