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<P>Once again, I promised I would review this a few days ago, but again, due to more things coming my way, I have been delayed. Anyway, here we go.</P>
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<P>I've seen plenty of backgrounds like this, where the background is more a pure splash of color rather than an actual landscape or design, so I won't comment on it. Let's move onto the meat of this pic.</P>
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<P>Now my first negative comment is, of course, on Mina. Her hand? It resembles a flesh-colored mitt of some kind. Not to mention her arm, hand, and where her fingers and ridge should be still have that strange cubist effect, and it's even worse this time. Please do not take offense at this, but it is there. Also, if you look very closely, you can see the upper area of her shoulder is not filled in and you can see the forest.</P>
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<P>Next up would be Mina's pants. The waist just floats around her midsection. Also, the grove in the back? It just looks a little too... drawn, I guess?</P>
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<P>Mina's head and face are probably the best parts of her in this one, but I just think her pigtails would be ever-so-slightly more prominent, and her expression a bit more gleeful at spanking another intruder. It just seems rather flat and two-dimensional. I do enjoy the way you've sort of gotten the mischievous gleam in her eye, although...</P>
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<P>This review probably seems harder than my previous, but it's really not. If anything, I enjoy this one a lot more. So here we go with the positive aspects of this pic.</P>
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<P>Surprisingly, what strikes me as the most well done in this is not Meru's neatly spanked and switched butt, but her hair (and that's quite a bit coming from a spanko). I mean... well, look at it! It's shiny, it's smooth, it's not bleeding (art wise), it has just the right texture, depth, color, and shading, it's like something out of an actual anime. Unbelievable work there.</P>
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<P>Much, much better work on Meru's socks and shoes. True, there are still a few blocks and lines here and there, but this time they aren't as noticeable, and they even seem to work with the art style this time, adding a whole new perspective to this. You even had her right shoe slightly hanging off of her foot, suggesting she's kicking exceptionally hard. <EM>Very</EM> nice touch.</P>
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<P>I simply adore the way you've gotten the flesh of Meru's waist to curve as she lays hunched over the log. I also enjoy the way you've gotten the shading down on her thighs and legs, as well as the curve of her leg joints. Wonderful.</P>
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<P>And her butt? What can I say? It's just well done. Interpret that any way you like.</P>
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<P>To wrap up this tedious critique, I found this one to be more satisfactory. Keep experimenting and see what works.</P>
Hey vpan! You did a drawing, nice!!! Good work, sorry I never got to illustrate this one like I needed to. -_- <br><br>Really well done, looks like Mina and Meru alright! And you captured the night-time feel very well also. Good work!!<br>
