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Kekeke, as a bonus you get this little credit page, although there is only me, I need to mention anyhow.
Just to show you that Ryoko isn't a total pushover and that Midori isn't the 'Top' in this relationship, I used this page to give Ryoko the opportunity to show her badass side as well ^^
Whatever wicked deeds Ryoko may have in mind for Midori... I leave it to your imagination. ^^
This one here ranks pretty high on my list of favourite positions too. There is just something about a woman being carried off by her lover like that, her bottom readily accessible... Hmmm ^^
Let me conclude this series with a few words about the manga itself. The basic idea was to have two characters which contrast each other and play with the common stereotypes and expectations of them.
Delinquent and Honour Student seemed like a good choice, since I liked the idea of playing with the school uniform character design and because I had a love-story between a delinquent and an honour student as polar opposites on my mind anyway. In the beginning I tried to make it look like an epic fight would occur, masking the real relationship the two girls were having. Judging from the comments, I guess I succeded ^^
Then I took the stereotypes of the bad delinquent and good honour student and reversed them, making Midori a bit bully-ish (or a badass-librarian type ^^) and Ryoko rather timid in comparison. It was fun drawing Ryoko, the 'tough gal' with all her scary make-up, become butter in Midori's hands ^^. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I to see the roles play out a bit differently.
I realize that 14 pages of manga, don't give much room for story, and it may feel a bit rushed, but I wanted to limit myself to a few pages.
So, in the end I have yet another yuri pairing of original characters, which would deserve to reappear in future manga/comics by me. Maybe I will actually manage to add another chapter or two to their story.
I thank everyone who commented so far. I really, really appreciate the feedback. Everyone who hasn't commented... well, I sure hope you change your mind and write one or two yet. I would appreciate the occassional lurker to leave a 'Thank you' at least. ^^
I know from my other pics that some actually do. Thanks for that!
I hope you enjoyed this little comic! Thank you all for your kind attention!
This was a fun one, Zero. It doesn't show off your talent as a story teller, which we've come to love - the kind of thing which some of your one-of compositions, and your Dark Knight comics have definitely made us love... Instead, this one was definitely more of you stretching your artistic muscles... constantly using different poses and positions, showing us your skill at the female form.
...to be honest? You almost could have done this comic without words. It presents itself to me more as you showing us what you can draw... and combining your ability to tell a story with your artwork? It comes first and foremost in the drawings, not the dialogue. Just food for thought. ^_^ ...nice job!
You did a very nice job of having the story turn out differently than what could be expected.
Both of your characters look very nice (although I must confess I'm not a fan of running mascara). I found the body poses you used very expressive and enjoyable. And I really liked the few chibis you used !
My favorite page is probably this last one. This position is always great and I love the way we suddenly find Midori, who was very much in control during almost all of the comics, half-nude, spanked and very happily letting Ryoko carry her away (to a fate that probably won't be too unbearable).
man! exelent, I see how much you have improve, especially in the characters structure and proportions. there are two or three points in the graphic narration that could be improve, if you want to know drop me a PM.
What an incredibly cute pic! I too love this position. It's easy to smack a naughty girl's bottom when you have her over your shoulder! Keep up the good work, amigo!!!
Wish we could have seen that delinquent smack that honour student's ass (I know the picture implies that a scene like that did happen, what I mean is I wish we would have seen her in the process of spanking.)
One, the delinquent continues to cause trouble so that she can continue to be punished for her acts by that honor student. Meanwhile the honor student stays on the honorable path, at least on the surface and receives spankings and some love by that delinquent as encouragement to stay on that path. All the while keeping their relationship a secret from the school administration.
Keep it sort of a never-ending cycle and even have the teachers become suspicious. Oh, but then again, you sir are the artist and it is your ideas and vision that matter, not mine. Sorry if I come off as rude.
I know this message comes to you late, but I hope you get it. Like you, I love the positioning of the bare bottom young woman being carried--maybe to punishment, maybe to love making, maybe to both. Yes, I am rather interested in bondage, and really for me the hottest form of bondage is that of a girl being carried off--"bottoms-up," as I like to refer to it--in the strong and secure arms of another, stronger woman. I'm not sure, but I thimk you said something about a fight? Well, to tell the truth, I don't really care for spanking games, my apologies to people who do. I like to imagine that there had been a REAL fight between the two, and that the "dilinquent" wins the fight. After that the girl in black strips off the girl's pants, panties, shoes and socks, leaving her private area exposed. After the fight, the winner take the virtually naked girl to a flat rock, the loser's right arm twisted behind her, and once there the winner smacks the "librarian" girl hard with--what? I guess a swithch, leaving the loser's bottom red-hot accompanied by a few welts. Then, the winner--a witch, I think carries her captive to her secret grotto and--well, I won't go into detail, but if I were that beaten girl, I would be madly, DESPERATELY in love with her! I guess I would be her slave!--No playtime! (sorry!)
Did you really feel there was the need to resurrect a five year-old thread to give us yet another long winded, one-sided monologue about your preferences and the stories you like to make up in your head? It's not like you don't do it on a regular basis in current threads anyways. And, you know, there´s a perfectly valid "Fiction" section in the site inteded just for that.
