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Didn´t it hurt, last time I beat you? (You´re speaking about the past, since he said "last time". Hence, the verb must be in past tense)
Ouch! Yes, it hurt! It hurts every time!
Panel 2:
Why dare to get in trouble again, then? Who brought the perfume?
(Without "then", it would be a general question "Why would you/anyone dare to get in trouble", but here the sentence is actually tied with something already said in the text- Panel 2. This connection needs to be pointed out somehow)
Panel 3:
Fine as it is, no changes needed.
Panel 4:
Lies! Lies! ("Lie to me" is actually an imperative- it is telling her to lie, not pointing out the fact that what she says is a lie)
