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These are very good characters, both in correct proportions to each other. The likeness is well achieved looking as if they are mother / daughter or niece / aunt. The clothes hang particularly well on both of them.
The only little matter is one of proportion. See, while you're free to stylize your characters, you have to stick to some rules nonetheless.
Standard proportions for adults are around 7 heads (that's to say the head's length fits around 7 times in the body (including the head)). Your characters are about 5 heads each... And that's not the problem ! Like I said, style is a matter of taste. *But*, the two characters aren't of the same age.
Taken separately, there wouldn't be a problem, but adults and children (or adolescents) can't have the same proportions ! The girl's fine, but the mother should probably have a smaller head in relation to her body, to show the difference. Children aren't just smaller adults, their body type is wildly different.
Children have a smaller heads/body ratio than adults, and you have to reflect that, regardless of your chosen frame of basic proportions. So if you wants your adults to be 5 heads tall, make your children 4, for instance, or, to the contrary, take the child as a frame of reference and add heads to the adult. Your style, your choice, but make them different
I hope it's somewhat clear for you ! :\
But the picture's fine nonetheless ! And very smooth, to boot
