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Its not bad at all... however it just screams that you used an underlying reference.
If so you really, really need to declare it and be very clear what you used and if you had permission for that. If not, I find it very odd that its a perfect OTK pose absenting construction and omitting the spankees arm.
I recomend strongly to use photoshop, GIMP (which is free) or any other program that allows layering which allows you to keep the lineart separate and eliminates the white spaces, this'll really bring out the tones too.
There's actually nothing to criticise, the lines are great, I'm sorry to say I just struggle to shake the belief that its 100% original and unaided in this state given the framing.
I used manga studio, and freeze frame from a spanking video as a reference, the arm is omitted because I wanted to move on to a different drawing before I finished, I had originally planned to use a different freeze frame from another video as a reference for the spanker, but again I started something else, as to permissions I'm not really sure what the protocol is if you use the outline of a freeze frame from a video, do you need permission for an out line from something like that?
I'd also suggest not relying on tracing from other media and developing your own style. Use other media to try and develop it, by all means, but if you rely on other media as a source, then you will be limited by what is available for what you want to draw, rather than being able to draw what you want freehand. Even if you are not completely happy with your style at first, it will grow and you'll end up being more satisfied in the long run.
Other than that, it's a fine picture. More defining lines would be nice, but you did well translating the capture to line drawing.
You guys are right about it limiting what you can do, I plan on trying to do the proportion outlines for the bodies myself from now on, but this drawing was a good learning experience for me. And the white lines can be removed if I do a hard outline for the whole drawing instead of just the easier parts, I blended the sketch layer with the boarder layer not knowing it would end up that way.
