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Here is my introduction for a possible new series after completing my other works.
For all you guys who don't know the title:
Kingdom Hearts is a game for Playstation 2.
It contains Disney and Square Enix characters, especially from Final Fantasy.
In Kingdom Hearts , Selphie, Yuffie and Tidus are still kids for example.
New characters are the main-hero Sora and his girlfriend Kairi.
In my story, Aerith and Tifa are full adults already. They became educators and want to create a new generation of child-heroes like Sora. Discipline, obedience and respect are the 3 things, the children have to learn and corporal punishment is highly approved by Tifa and Aerith because they got punished the same way in their childhood.
Aerith and Tifa are adults in the game anyways, and you forgot Riku. Also Tifa wasn't in the first game if you remember correctly, but thats just me paying attention to detail. This is a fanfic, so you can do it however you want. We're all awaiting Kingdom Hearts three already, but I suppose theres one or two out of a million people who haven't heard of this game. My favorite game series ever, it's a wonderful idea for a series. I love the idea, and seeing my favorite characters like this is humorous and delightful. Like in this I get to see Kairi getting spanked on her bare bum over Aerith's lap. My only problem is the idea of boys getting paddles and girls getting a slipper, which I know from experiance is not nearly as bad. I guess we all have our own ways of doing stuff, so if you want to be lenient with girls and harsh on boys go on ahead. But if I was a girl I'd be asking for no special treatment, and to be punished equally, despite the extra pain. Thats just me. In the end you put work into this idea and make sure to explain every detail, and the general idea is a good one. Just make sure you have time to finish your other series if your gonna work on this delightful idea.
You're right, but BEFORE Kingdom Hearts they were kids/teens.
...in FF VII Tifa was 17 and Aerith was 15. I just want to make it clear in THIS story .
Tifa was missing in the first part , but thats not bad for me. Aerith is normally dead already, but KH is timeless, you can see Sephiroth and other guys again^^
Well i think a slipper can hurt a lot, its just another way to spank.
A slippering can be longer than a paddling for example. I think a slipper is just a "smart implement" for smart girls. Dont worry,girls will get the same procedure like boys...^^
Kairis spankings will be rare (for the moment) , because shes not that sassy character to earn for every litte thing a punishment, but there are always ways^^
D_T your wrong about the ages. I actually own final fantasy seven, and for one thing Aeries is two years older than Tifa. In FFVII Aeries is 22, and Tifa is 20. Sorry to be annoying, but I'm a die hard fan with the facts at my feet (literally XP). Just trying to be informal, I mean you no offense. I respect you too much to be rude to you. ^_^
Also Aeries was alive in KH 1 and 2, nothing wrong with her being alive here. I mean Yuna was a pixie for petes sake, you can have things however you want with this series. Hahaha!
Xam: You OWN FF7? I mean, I have the game, but the actual copyrights to it must cost a fortune! (Yes, I'm joking)
As for the slipper vs paddle: it is a bit unfair and sexist, just like most English schools used to have the cane for boys and slipper for girls. But if the slipper is just used more times, to make up for it, all is good.
Also, of course, some people place sand/lead shot in the end of the slipper to weigh it down for heavier impact. Flicking the end in the right way, so that the toe of it strikes the perineum and back of the vulva is also a common tactic, which probably makes up for the lack of severity.
Thats the point: In school it was normal that boys got the cane and girls the slipper. The possible reason is, that boys are often braver than girls, i think. They need a "harder" implement to cause more effects on them. For girls a slipper is effective enough. In addition, i prefer the slipper because it looks cute for girls^^
D_T: True. Although studies apparently show that corporal punishment largely had no effect on boys (who treated it as a macho "Look how tough I am! I took 12 strokes!" thing), whereas it had great effect on girls (who would generally be very embarrassed).
And so basically every school system that decided to only smack boys, and every judicial system (they traditionally only used whipping/birching/whatever for men) failed immensely, as they did it the wrong way round.
Maybe I'm just bitter, having negative interest in boys.
I like boys AND girl. To be blunt I just think if a boy gets smacked with a paddle so should girls. And if girls have a chance to get spanked with a slipper so should boys. Of course this is coming from a pansexual. People like you (that means bi, it's not a negative statement) just prefer to do one thing with one gender, and another thing with the other gender. Whereas we pansexuals do one thing with one gender, and the same exact thing with the other gender. Your not going by ancient schools, your going by what you want which is noble by all means. You like to do different things with different genders, I like to do the same thing. It just goes to show you people look at the world more colorfully than monochromatic. I like the story, and don't you change a single thing about it. (Except your facts. lol. ps, Yuffie is 16. Forgot to mention that. Wow cid is 32, what a geezer. And Squall (Leon) is 17! I thought he was in his twenties at least. Yes I'm just looking at all this noe. =p I'm totally giving Leon and Yuffie a relationship in a fiction. XD)
You're right with the ages, but i have no problems to change facts^^ . KH and the SquareEnix-Universe is timeless , i think i can break some rules, sorry for wrong informations. Some known characters i still want to introduce could be younger or older...it depends on the storyline^^ but thank you for your honest criticism.
Don't care about the exact ages or wheter or not girls should get the paddle too... this is a nice drawing
D_T Little crowded with al the text, but in this picture I like it ;-)
I remember seeing this when I first played Kingdom Hearts on the PS3, and seeing this made me wish that they included the punishment room in Traverse Town. I really like this scenario, especially the penalties of each spanking.
Special mention goes for the priceless expressions; Sora has obviously been spanked and he feels the guilt: Sephie's angered by his recklessness: Kairi looks like she's trying to hold it all in and looks at the door hearing Selphie's scolding, and Aerith looks in the middle of stern and monotone, like she has to deal with yet another mishap as if it was normal for her.
Like the spanking overall and Kairi having to go on tiptoes while over Aerith's knee.
this is a nice drawing 
so I made this
